Editing / Re-writing: sentence construction and vocabulary to ensure understanding

In the extracts from two edited documents below, we see a number of problems that required correction, i.e.:

  • Sentences construction: short sentences that should be joined to create ‘flow’
  • Tautology
  • Vocabulary
  • Character spaces
  • Sentence construction: interrupted phrases / clauses

Blog20b

Blog20a

Categories: Editing and Re-writing.

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